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  1. Asserd added a post in a topic Possible writer for any province   

    Thanks for the help  Is the writing itslef ok, as I'll want to look to improve if it is not suitable.
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    Possible writer for any province
    Hello, i'd like to become a writer for the beyond Skyrim team, I have a script prepared below but I've made up location names as i dont know what locations will be used, and this could be used in any city in any province but I'll place it in Bruma for now. Emotions are displayed in brackets and are underlined.
    As you enter Bruma you get approached by a weak yet wealthy-looking Imperial male called Pagus.
    PAGUS: Traveller! Traveller! You look like a fine warrior, I have a certain proposition for you and you could end up with a large amount of septims if you hear me out.
    BRANCH 1
    PLAYER: I dont have time to deal with this, now leave me be.
    PAGUS: um...okay, sorry for bothering you. (disappointed)
    This would not start the quest until the player speaks to Pagus again, another time.
    BRANCH 2
    PLAYER: Okay, I'm listening.
    PAGUS: Oh, good! It's about this girl; Rusana, she is the fairest girl in all of Bruma...no Cyrodiil! but she has been taken by those damn bandits from Black Tooth Cave. 
                  BRANCH 2.1
                  PLAYER: How did this happen?
                  PAGUS: We were on a romantic walk outside Bruma, then all of a sudden we were ambushed by the bandits; they beat me and left me on the side of the road but they took Rusana!
                 BRANCH 2.2
                 PLAYER: Why would they take her?
                  PAGUS: Probably for her good looks... or... I dont know, these bandits are unpredictable!
                 BRANCH 2.3
                PLAYER: What do you want me to do?
                PAGUS: To save her of course!(pause) but there is something else I need you to do...(starts to become shy or embarressed)
                        BRANCH 2.31
                         PLAYER: Why can't you do it?
                         PAGUS: I'm not good with a sword, nor with a bow, nor with magic, the list goes on.The point is I'm not a good fighter.
                        BRANCH 2.32
                        PLAYER:What else do you want me to do?
                        PAGUS: Ah... well I need you to wear a mask, you see, when you see Rusana, she needs to think it was me who saved her so hide your face and dont talk too much and you could get away with it.
                                               BRANCH 2.321
                                               PLAYER: And if I don't wear the mask?
                                              PAGUS: Well... I.... I haven't thought about it (worried)but I need you to do it, it will further my relationship with Rusana plus I will pay you a hefty amount.
                                             BRANCH 2.322
                                             PLAYER: Alright I'm in.
                                             PAGUS: Good, good, here is the mask and 200 septims for now and more when she returns. Now all you need to do is retrieve Rusana for Black Tooth Cave.
    The player is handed a mask or helmet that fully conceals the face and 200 septims
    WEARING THE MASK IS OPTIONAL
    SCENARIO 1- Wearing the mask
    Once you've killed all the bandits and creatures in Black Tooth Cave, and you have got to the end of the Cave, you spot a beautiful female Imperial called Rusana
    RUSANA: Hello, who is there? Have you come to save me?
    PLAYER: It's me Pagus, I'm here to free you.
    RUSANA: Pagus? You look bigger... and sound...different.
    BRANCH 1
    PLAYER: Of course it's me,  I wouldn't just leave you with these bandits!
    RUSANA: Oh, Pagus! I could kiss you right now, but we'll talk more about that when we're back in Bruma.(relieved)
    Rusana runs back to Bruma
    BRANCH 2
    PLAYER: um... no Pagus hired me to save you
    RUSANA: He did? Then why did you lie about being Pagus?
    PLAYER: He told me to do so, he's madly in love with you.
    RUSANA: Well that explains alot, well thank you anyway I'll see you around... and thanks for being honest with me.
    Rusana runs back to Bruma
    SCENARIO 2- Not wearing the mask
    Once you've killed all the bandits and creatures in Black Tooth Cave, and you have got to the end of the Cave, you spot a beautiful female Imperial called Rusana
    RUSANA: Hello, who is there? Have you come to save me?
    PLAYER: Just a traveller sent to save you
    RUSANA: Thank the gods, finally someone is here to save me!(relieved)
    BRANCH 1
    PLAYER: Just doing my job
    RUSANA: Well thank you, I'll see you around... handsome.(Flirtatious)
    Rusana runs back to Bruma
    BRANCH 2
    PLAYER: I'd do anything for you, beautiful(Flirt)
    RUSANA: Oh my, a skilled fighter and charming, I'll hope to see you around.
    Rusana runs back to Bruma
    ENDING 1- You wore the mask and lied to Rusana
    Pagus approaches you when you return
    PAGUS: Oh, thank you, thank you traveller, Rusana came back and thanked me and we confessed our love for eachother then...(ecstatic)
    PLAYER: Alright I don't need all the details.
    PAGUS: Oh yes, here is the promised septims, see you friend.
    800 septims is gifted to the player
    Quest ends.
    ENDING 2- You wore the mask but told the truth to Rusana
    Pagus approaches you when you return
    PAGUS: How could you, you fool!(annoyed)
    BRANCH 1
    PLAYER: You told me to get the girl and and wear the mask, thats it.(Persuade)
    PAGUS: You may be right but you must be an imbecile to not realize that you should NOT reveal your identity
    PLAYER: Calm down, she still seemed interested in you.
    PAGUS: I guess your right, I can still salvage my relationship with Rusana, but I can only give you a quarter of what you were promised. Now get out of my sight
    150 septims is gifted to the player.
    Quest ends.
    BRANCH 2
    PLAYER: Talk to me like that once more and I'll have your head!
    PAGUS: Woah, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I mean no offense, please just take this and leave.(scared)
    300 septims is gifted to the player.
               BRANCH 2.1
               PLAYER: Alright then.
          Quest ends.
             BRANCH 2.2
             PLAYER: That's not enough, I want more!(Threaten)
            If you have a high speech level then,
             PAGUS: Okay, okay, here take this, its the rest of my money.(terrified)
            Another 300 septims is gifted to the player.
            If you don't have a high speech level then,
           PAGUS: Look, i do
           Quest ends.
    ENDING 3- You did not wear the mask
    Pagus approaches you when you return
    PAGUS: You Bastard! I can't even talk to Rusana anymore, she is head over heels for you!(Angry)
    BRANCH 1
    PLAYER: Tough luck, I'm not a liar.
    PAGUS: Well you'll certainly not recieve the rest of the payment. Now leave!
    Quest ends, Rusana becomes a eligible for marriage with the player.
    BRANCH 2
    PLAYER: Back off and give me my money... or else.(Threaten)
    PAGUS: Look okay... let's not be hasty here, just take this and stay out of my sight or I'll stay out of yours, whatever is best for you.(Startled)
    Player recieves 100 gold.
    Quest ends, Rusana becomes a eligible for marriage with the player.
    Feedback would greatly be appreciated especially comments on the format as I'm not sure if it is too confusing for others(Thanks to Nick_R for helping me fix that). Thanks for taking your time to read this!
     
     
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